it is her voice
that i remember most,
her voice that signifies
her
to me.
when i try to think of how
she looks now
or even how she looked then,
it is her voice
that i see in my mind.
smoky and craggy
with just a bit of my mother's inflection
but more of a warble,
a rolling, a call.
i was her favored one,
the favorite niece of a crazy aunt
who claimed ESP
and knew you were coming
before your call.
the prompt was aunts at readwritepoem
on a sidenote: my blog turns THREE today...
what started off as a place to vent about not
being able to get a mortgage has turned into
a major part of my life...has given me a place
to be creative, has allowed me to "meet"
others that like the same things i do, and has
led me to new friends...
and for the first time since i have started blogging,
i plan on doing a giveaway...a surprise....
a name will be picked randomly from the
comments.
would it be wrong to make my blog a cake?
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14 comments:
Very nice poem. Happy Blogiversay!!
A cake sounds like a fun idea. Have great day.
happy bloggiversary! THREE is a lot :)
your poem is evocative and cool.
now i'm off ot catch up on the other stuff i've been missing...
Vx
I love the poem!
wicked witch
This was wonderful... I like those kinds of aunts!
Happy Blogiversary as well!
I second the cake!
:)
I like how you focused on her voice all the way through. I could hear her, too!
Wow, 3 years! I haven't even been at it for one, yet. You go girl!
I love this poem - it gives me hope my nieces and nephews might remember me as something more than being the "odd auntie".
Happy Blog Birthday to you! Isn't it wonderful that a blog can lead us to such happy surprises? I say bake a cake and light some candles too.
woohooo!
happy birthday!
it's the small snippets of hand-made, home-made things i remember of people the most. great poem.
and no, cake is good an.y.time
:)
happy blogaversary! I'd sing it to you if I lived across the street.
happy blogaversary... really nice poem,, and i would be proud to be her favorite....
my mom didn't have a sister, so I never thought about what that alike-but-not voice might have been...
and i like that you "see" her voice.
Terrific, "...a warble, a call...". What a fun aunt to be the favorite of!
And yes to cake! Marble, lemon, chocolate, anything you want at all. Three years blogging! Happy blogginess.
happy blogversary! (how does cybercake taste? a bit like astronaut ice cream? mmn ice cream, i may have to have some now to go with your cake!)
what a beautiful poem and
HAPPY HAPPY blogiversary!! i think a cake is definitely appropriate :) can i pop by for a piece ;-) xo
Happy Blogiversary to you. Many more to come I'm sure.
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