it has been a long time
since i have participated in
sunday scribblings
but i want to challenge myself
to try to write more often
so why not start here.
the prompt was fridge space
and what it brought me was a little snippet
of words that don't rhyme.
and i am left within
the fridge space of your heart
cold and empty
with only the bare necessities
to keep me alive
the light
only comes on
when you
look
at me.
Sunday, February 10, 2008
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15 comments:
excellent take on the prompt. very original unrequited love?
I loved this! Great pic and poem. :)
Yes...great new beginning for such a creative girl!
And the poem mixes beautifully with the light on the photo :)
Beautiful! I love the strength of its ending, such powerful words.
"the light only comes on when you look at me"
just perfect; love it.
thanks for coming by and saying such nice things :)
am loving the poisonwood bible so far, i just wish i had more time to read it!
the imagery and words...
brilliant dear girl, just brilliant.
how absolutely fabulous ... inspiring :)
that was great!!!! i wrote mine this weekend at an outing to barnes and noble but didn't get it posted yet...tonight...
Clever take on the prompt - unrequited love... Space for something good!
Great comeback! Really lovely. ;o)
Great poem!
A few words that say so much. Really nice.
EXCELLENT ... well done!!!
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