Thursday, August 24, 2006

poetry thursday...time after time

prompt: time


tonight the omnipresent
past
tries to tear up my mind...
i've been sitting in
silence
too long.

it is my longing for revival,
my story, my mantra...
it is the insanity
that has become
my song.
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3 comments:

wendy said...

This is simple but deep. I think I know the tune of that song....

8:21 PM
Deb R said...

"it is the insanity
that has become
my song."

Oh yeah.
Man, do I ever know that song.

11:47 PM
mareymercy said...

Some nice alliteration here - "omnipresent past" the story/insanity/strong. i like the rhythm of it.

12:24 AM

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