Tuesday, October 28, 2008

SPC{reflected}{week 4}



what is reflected
{deflected}
back to me
when i look up to you...


tiredness
disappointment
hunger
thirst
waiting and expecting
needing and wanting
reserved and hopeful
optimistic and cynical
a chatty introvert

{alice through the looking glass}

i wish i could read you
could know you
could see you

i wish i could accept you
in all your sum of parts,
your flawed inventory,
your backandforth story.

and yet
i make do with what you give me.

more SPC here

4 comments:

andie said...

...and your a beautiful poet as well. I should of known!

Lovely hon.
a.

liz elayne lamoreux said...

really love this.

yes.

thank you for these words.

daisies said...

wonderful .. love!!

S.L. Corsua said...

Introspective. I especially liked the use of "deflected", in brackets, and "flawed inventory".

Cheers.