Sunday, April 27, 2008

post-a-poem, april fifteen

sunday morning sunshine
cereal and green grass
blue bike on the front lawn
i sit and wait for you

i bide my time
i count the seconds
i wait for your return

laundry on the floor
dishes to do
newspaper calling
but all i want is you.

i wait alone
in a room full
of people.


daisies said...

sigh ... wonderful

Michelle (a.k.a. la vie en rose) said...

i think every month should be poetry month...

Peter said...

You carried this one off very nicely. I like the juxtaposition of the stanzas -- just the right images, common voice, parallel structure, and repetition. The last stanza is really fine!